I have been following WDRB news station and they have a lot of articles that are not important headline stories. For example o “Runaway NORAD blimp on the ground secured, according to Pa. state police” this is a very blown up article basically talking about a blimp that got lose and the finally got it back. The most dangerous thing the blimp did was that it caused 18,000 power outages, that is a big deal but there shouldn’t be a whole article over how the blimp got lose there should be an article over how the blimp caused 18,000 power outages. There is no explanation in this article showing us the big picture and saying why. This article is very vague and doesn’t show a lot of information at all. This article is kind of a newsworthy article but it doesn’t have a lot of newsworthy to it. This article needs to find the valuable information in it and make that an article because this article looks like it was put together in ten minutes. It is a very short article and has little facts about the blimp going off the ground and causing damage it should go into to more depth and show more information about the interesting and less about the obvious. This should be a type of article that is Peripheral topic like an accident it shouldn’t be a news story. This article should be a story let along a headline about a blimp.
http://www.wdrb.com/story/30375242/us-fighter-jets-tracking-unmanned-norad-blimp-on-the-loose
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